Elements/Concepts/Tools of Analysis

The following elements are what the various groups would be marked on. These are the what we must base the changes of our film on.
Editing
Titles
Sounds
Genre
Pace
Mise en Scene
Lighting
Performance
Narrative
Characters

The changes to The Film Top 10 that we must change, due to feedback from the other groups, are:
•A change of Sound for the Montage Scene to make a change of pace. This would be done by editing and Garage band.
•The Montage Scene to be made more distinct. This will be done by just editing and fading the shots with overlays.
•We need to insert the words "Top 10" into the scene although preferable not at the end of the film. This will make the opening scenes of the film seem more like a trailer.
•Changing the order of the first shots because the scenes with the Brains and the Tech are in the same room. We need to break it up by adding in another scene before going back to it.
•The lighting for the montage shots is a bit dark, this needs to be changed to allow more to be seen. This could also change the pace of the film and allow the audience to understand it better.
•The titles need to have the professional beginnings to them like "Directed by" and "Produced by". This is purely for show but will allow us to make it hit the "Opening Scene" characteristics.
•The Sunhappy Productions begining needs to be added just to make the film look more professional.