Top 10 Roughcut feedback

Today we showed the rough cut to the rest of the group and this is the feedback we got:

It had lots of good crime caper generic conventions.
Good music but it was too repetitive towards the end of the clip.
The freeze frames were effective.
The montage planning scene was too dark.
Lots of people said that the clip lost it towards the end, so we need to change the focus in some way.